New Sounds, New Descriptions

Try something very simple…yet very challenging. Find a sound or group of sounds you have never really listened to, or that you haven’t heard in many years. Sit down, close your eyes, and listen. Listen for rhythm, tone, subtleties, and amplitude. Listen to how the sound moves, how its volume changes, how it informs you when the wind and distance start to sweep it away. Become so immersed that you embody the advice of Beat novelist Jack Kerouac (On The Road): “Be submissive to everything, opening, listening.”

Grab your journal or computer, and write what you experienced. When finished, go into a work-in-progress, or a story or essay you’d like to write, and find or develop a scene that involves listening. Either write the scene anew, instilling the depth you just experienced from your period of listening, or enhance an existing narrative with this deeper observation.

(From The Write Time: 366 Exercises to Fulfill Your Writing Life, by Robert Yehling, to be published in Summer 2009 by Pen & Publish. To pre-order an advance, signed copy.)

Writing from Immediate Experience

We often talk about “presence,” “in the moment,” the “eternal now,” “the point of power is in the present” and other terms synonymous with right this second. This very moment is our fulcrum between creations past and future. It is the dawn of the rest of our lives. Everything that transpired before this moment can only inform and season us for what lies ahead.

Take your journal with you today, no matter where you go. Something will happen about which to write. Capture the experience instantly—preferably as you’re having it. Take us into the emotional joy, upheaval or physical intensity of the experience. Use only live, active verbs—it is happening now! See if you can capture all the details, feelings, highlights or lowlights, what is said…what is unsaid. A few hours after you’re finished, go back to your journal and read…rich, isn’t it? Writing immediate experience gives us the liberating fluency to write about anything, at any time.

The original exercises presented on 366writing.wordpress.com are excerpts from the book, The Write Time: 366 Daily Exercises to Fulfill Your Writing Life, by Robert Yehling, which will be published in July 2009 by Pen & Publish. To pre-order, write to info@penandpublish.com.

If you’d like for us to publish a completed exercise on 366writing.wordpress.com, simply send us the piece of writing, along with your name, email or website address and the exercise from which you wrote. We’ll publish it on 366writing.wordpress.com and link back to you! Email your exercise to: bob@wordjourneys.com.

Be sure to check out our books:
The Write Time: 366 Daily Exercises for Writing, Healing & Living (pre-order only)
Writes of Life: Using Personal Experiences in Everything You Write
The River-Fed Stone: New Poetry & Essays
Coyotes in Broad Daylight: New Poetry & Essays
Shades of Green: Collected Poetry & Essays, 1985-2005
Freedom of Vision: Voices from Behind Prison Walls (anthology)

Building Composite Characters — Part II

You’ve taken bits and pieces of your life and others who might make good book or story characters, and you’ve created a composite character. Now, let’s give him or her a story in which to shine. 

Imagine five things your character does well. Write them down.

Now imagine the three most likely emotional states in which your character will be. Write them down. 

Finally, imagine three situations or circumstances that will cause your character conflict, either within themselves or in the world. Write them down.

Take some of the information you’ve just learned about your character, and develop a story around your character’s emotions, motives, thoughts, feelings and actions. Make it a short story—one situation, one conflict, one resolution (or lack of resolution). Populate your story with verbs that describe your character’s inner world, feelings, attitudes. Give us a physical description of your character, which includes not only facial or bodily appearance—and clothing—but also facial and bodily expressions, the way your character moves.

Just write the story, of about 500 to 1,000 words. Bring your composite character to live. See if it is a character you can use in more stories—or books.

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Building Composite Characters — Part One

Fiction and creative non-fiction writers are always dabbling with the creation of new characters. We study hundreds or thousands of faces, expressions and movements, either know or imagine their histories, and form our characters. Seldom is a character derived from a single person, unless we’re writing biography, autobiography or creating a minor character.

Many characters and settings in movies, books and stories combine several people or places that the author/screenwriter either knows, knows of, or researches. These are called “composites.” Think of Louis L’Amour’s Jubal Sackett, Anne Rice’s Vampire Lestat, Richard Ford’s Frank Bascombe or any of the serial novelists’ countless characters. The creator stitches together enough elements to build the character or place to match his/her vision for the story, then adds from his or her imagination, often seasoned with personal experience and personal traits. For example, in The Voice, my forthcoming novel, I drew from the traits, actions and styles of twenty great rock musicians of the past forty years—plus plenty of idosyncracies from my own life and my imagination—to create Tom Timoreaux, the protagonist.

Let’s create a composite character today. Imagine a character about which you’d like to write. It could even be a younger or older version of yourself. Now, think of the coolest or most infuriating traits of six people you know—traits that evoke emotional responses. Consider their words, expressions, movements. Bring them together in your mind, and write a 500-word sketch of that character. Just let it flow, as either a description or a monologue in the character’s voice.

When you’re finished, see how many of those six people are represented, in whole or part, in your composite. Then create a story wrapped around this new character. Let us know what you wrote!

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